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　　DearPeter，

　　Don't worry about yourstudy too much.First，you should learn how to relax yourself.I thinkdoing more sports is good for your health.Listening to music is also a good wayto relax.And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits.Pleaseremember to have breakfast every morning.It can give you enough energy to studyfor the whole morning.You'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep.Itwill keep you active during the day.Finally I think you should talk with yourfriends，parents or teachers often.Tell them about your thoughts andfeelings.Try to get help from them. I hope you can stay in good spirits，andstudy better.

　　Yours

　　Li Ming

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

　　寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如I think doing more sports is good for your health.Listeningto music is also a good way to relax.等，F(xiàn)inally等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。


 

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