【參考范文】

　　DearMike,

　　You spent too much timeplaying computer games recently and fell behind others in study. As your goodfriend, I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, spending too much time onplaying computer games is very bad for our eyes. To protect our eyes, we’d bettergive it up. Second, you can do exercise and play sports with your friends afterschool and it is good for our health. Finally, you should spend more time onyour study and I will help you catch up with others.

　　【解析】

　　題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)提示主要從三方面給出建議：一，沉迷電腦游戲?qū)ι眢w的影響；二，多運(yùn)動(dòng)；三，把時(shí)間花費(fèi)到學(xué)習(xí)上。

　　【點(diǎn)評(píng)】短文內(nèi)容完整，分三個(gè)方面提出建議，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，提出建議的句式豐富多變。

　　【高分亮點(diǎn)】

　　短語：too much time，spend…doingsth; fell behind others; I’d like to;be bad for;be good for;catch up with

　　句型：提建議的句式：had better dosth; you should do；you can do sth。


 

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